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Old 08-18-2011, 02:24 PM   #21
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Originally Posted by twowheels View Post
Anyhow... what I really wanted to ask, though, was what do you find so off-putting about writing in the present tense?
I find it so contrived. How is the story being recorded so that I as the reader can experience it as it happens? Third person present tense is like the reader is God, watching the story unfold. First person present tense is the worst -- I'm telling the story as I'm living it out. Really? Fighting monsters and narrating the fighting as it happens? No. Sorry, I find that completely unbelievable. If a novel CANNOT suspend disbelief, for me it's a failure. :P

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