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Old 07-27-2011, 11:48 PM   #9
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To some extent, it seems to me this book had the potential to be truly epic - but it needed a couple more revisions and possibly a serious editor.
I can agree with that. I enjoy long-winded fantasy, but there are definite areas in this book that could be streamlined.

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and the writing is not bad, for fantasy standards.
Whoa. Whoa whoa whoa whoa. This is no longer the era of Piers Anthony. Take it back!
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