Originally Posted by jhempel24
Just finished, and enjoyed it!! I posted a review on all the sites, Amazon, B&N, Goodreads
....all say the same thing. (Links to B&N review.)
The only thing I didn't like, and I mentioned this in the review is that there is no separation between scene/location changes within a chapter, so it got very confusing sometimes.
But other than that, it was great, and this is the kind of horror I enjoy!
Thanks! I'll have to check out that paragraph break thing. I'm guessing it had something to do with the Smashwords meat grinder (as they call it) - so I'll try to figure out why it does that. (The Kindle version came out fine.)
Anyway, I appreciate the feedback!