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Old 01-17-2011, 09:35 PM   #3
DavidKitson
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Thankyou Falcao,

I really appreciate your comments and am glad you enjoyed the twist. To date, none of the readers has seen it coming either and I had to tread a fine line between not giving it away while making it obvious once it occurs.

It makes it really hard to describe the novel though because the twist is so prominent in the plot. I really enjoy hearing back from people who liked that though, so really am thankful for your feedback.

( The twist is in Turing Evolved, BTW, not in Military Diorama - For other readers. ).

Thankyou again for taking the time to read both stories
David.
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