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Old 12-27-2010, 07:51 PM   #3
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I liked this one.

It's a bit more like prose-art to me than a story per se. I wonder if I've just coined a term there.

It's a bit like a poem that has been created as prose - all atmosphere, imagery and effect.

I liked it though.

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