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Old 12-26-2010, 06:27 AM   #6
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Finally got to this.

Cool little story. The only thing I was disappointed about was that this could've really been fleshed out to be a great novella.

Peter and Palequus were great characters that I'd like to know more about and I think I could have enjoyed Mr Kite's Cavalcade of Unnatural History could have been a really interesting location for a much bigger story.

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Caleb
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