Hello,

A few months ago I wrote a short story--sort of in the style of Douglas Adams, just a fun, goofy, off the wall science fiction story. I wasn't sure what to do with it, but thanks to smashwords, I could make it available online :)

If any one would be interested in checking it out, I would absolutely love a critique! It's pretty short, and shouldn't take long to read!

Here's the link:
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/76

I'd really like constructive criticism--but please be gentle: it's just something I did for fun!

Thanks a lot
Connie

edit: You don't have to pay for it or anything! I just picked "set your own price" on the off chance that anyone would like to contribute to the rapidly shrinking financial resources of a college student ;)