I did not like the previous version of this poem, so I did my own.

Note: I reduced the font size to 8 so the lines are not split on my Reader. It looks good.

I found a few things that do need correcting.

Is there--_is_ there balm in Gilead?--tell me--tell me, I implore!"

Take that line.. _is_ should be is. _ are used to denote italics. Also -- should be — (em dash). Other then that I think it's fine.